Draft Comments

After getting my marks back for my draft work (High Level 2) I have decided that I need to evaluate more closely what I need to do to improve my ideas. One of the issues with my magazine cover is that the models on the front cover don't look asif they are in a band together. I think that I should consider looking at other layouts I tried in the mock ups, such as having them together in the middle so it would work better. Also I am thinking about changing the font of the text 'The like' so that it is obvious that they are the main feature of the magaizine.